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Sunflowers

Stars I gaze, all night - as if in a reverie, Under the sky as I stand, yearning to be Near you and admire the blue-black velvet and Feel the breath of silence, so serene - to be Lost in the warmth of a dream-like enchanting moment; Oceans apart, now, still our souls merge When the universe in unison tunes a melody, Entranced by the lustrous stars in the quiet of the night, Reflecting the charm of our love, as I gape at the Same star you stare at from a distant land. Date: 05/26/2021 Submitted for: Sunflower Poetry Contest Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 8/25/2021 10:59:00 AM
What a creative/beautiful Acrostic write. I love this and sunflowers. Have a blessed day.........................
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:45:00 PM
Hi Ani, Sunflowers put me in a good mood - I think this poem is exactly what I needed to read because I feel down and grumpy today. So well penned my friend. Hugs and blessings. P.S Your comment on my poem Thieves in the night dear Ani , yes, unfortunately everything I wrote in this poem is real and true. xxx
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Date: 6/1/2021 10:24:00 AM
Very lovely Ani! This has so many wonderful elements in its imagery and romantic yearning. Congratulations on your win! Blessings to you.
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Date: 6/1/2021 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. It is a beautiful poem ~ Mala
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Date: 5/31/2021 11:17:00 PM
Congratulations for standing very First on the List.
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Date: 5/31/2021 10:21:00 PM
To make an Acrostic meaningful is an art rarely seen, and you have beautifully done so here, congrats for a top win
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Date: 5/31/2021 6:16:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 5/30/2021 1:44:00 PM
Stars like sunflowers I imagine. Awesome!
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Date: 5/30/2021 5:35:00 AM
Ahhh!! How romantic for the one you love. Thanks for the visit to my page. This one reads like a good contender to me way to go. Sara
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Date: 5/28/2021 9:47:00 PM
Breathtakingly beautiful! Yiur last two lines are captivating! Best wishes!
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Date: 5/27/2021 8:51:00 AM
Oh this is lovely Ani. This speaks of two lovers separated by miles but still joined in spirit. Love it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/26/2021 11:05:00 PM
Very nice one.
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:41:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you always. Love, Gina
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Date: 5/26/2021 8:16:00 AM
I admire sunflowers when night falls and they bow their heads in praise of the Lord.
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Date: 5/26/2021 7:15:00 AM
I love sunflowers... this is lovely... well written. Ann
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