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Sunflower of Life

Sands blow over touching inside deep waves turning tides warmly glow, softly fluttering winds touching gently upon the shores. An oasis of beauty deeply dazzling freely calling your name, drifting a carpet mist kissing the air sweetly silver shadows hauntingly magic echoes, carrying music upon cotton clouds bouncing in each and every single whispering silent breath gasping Breathing upon one golden ritual forever shines always, I believe in you love, a sunflower made beautifully, brightening sunlight beams in every which way, adoring light all i ever wanted is you babe .

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/21/2014 12:14:00 AM

I think it's great that you chose the sunflower as your analogy of her radiance - for they always point towards the sun.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/21/2014 1:57:00 AM

a sunflower is tall and regal amongst flowers with an air of mystery wonderful comment timothy bless you

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2014 12:11:00 PM

you never lose your sweet loving touch, liam... much enjoyed!.. huggs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2014 5:20:00 PM

"I believe in you love, a sunflower made beautifully, brightening sunlight beams in every which way," I really like this part of the poem..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/5/2014 9:13:00 AM

Love, Liam....always angelic and sweet.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/4/2014 3:31:00 PM

She must be beautiful,cause sunflowers are mesmerizing.Yesterday I've seen a bunch..Ow so yellow and bright bathing in the sunlight.Lovely wanton feeling expressed.