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Sundrops

Sundrops dapple umbrageous trees strewing uncut diamonds, littering the path with ambient flickers of what lies beyond. Sundrops freckle ocean's surface accenting the ripples that pattern the waves, nuzzling playful kisses toward the warm beach. Sundrops seduce the wayward wind pirouetting with the aphids blissful dance, a frenzied tarantella across my lips.

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Howard Kerr

Date: 4/4/2024 1:34:00 PM

Hi Linda, This work is immaculate. The quintessential tribute to the sun in all its roles and how it impacts nature. Superb vignettes of the sun in different settings with vivid imagery. A joy to read. Thank you so much for reading Echoes Of A Shady Past and for congratulating me I appreciate that Howard

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/4/2024 2:41:00 PM

Many thanks Howard. I really appreciate your stopping by and reading some my work. Commenting is even more an honor, I love reading your work. I don't always comment, but I assure you I'm attentive. smiles and hugs Linda :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/4/2024 9:20:00 PM

Some seriously fine poetry here, Linda. I expect a poet laureate nomination or two soon...

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/5/2024 5:11:00 PM

LOL. I blush dear Gershon. Thanks for coming by! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 10:44:00 PM

Nicely written Tristich, Linda. Lovely imagery. I especially like the line, "nuzzling playful kisses toward the warm beach." A nice day at the beach. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:09:00 AM

Thanks Bill. I'd love to be at the beach today. :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/3/2024 5:20:00 PM

Your images were perfect and your poem captivating because of them. I love how you captured the essence of the warm sun...I especially liked: Sundrops seduce the wayward wind...such a wonderful image!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:08:00 AM

My Texas friend, I know you understand those sundrops! Thanks for commenting! :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 2/3/2024 2:32:00 PM

Perfect images described so eloquently, my friend. Masterfully written, Linda.

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/4/2024 8:07:00 AM

Many thanks Jerry. Good to see you this morning! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/3/2024 10:18:00 AM

Linda, your poem is such a beautiful ode to the mesmerizing play of sunlight in nature. The word images you've crafted is crystal and evocative, creating scenes of enchantment and serenity. Your words dance gracefully and elegantly, capturing the essence of the sun's gentle touch on earth. I can almost feel it. Love it! - Blessings, Danie

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/3/2024 10:49:00 AM

Many thanks for you frequent lovely visits and thoughtful expressions of my work Danie. I appreciate your supportiveness. blessings, Linda :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/3/2024 9:00:00 AM

Such a lovely poem, adorned in ornate words, Linda.---Sundrops freckle ocean's surface accenting the ripples that pattern the waves--Sundrops seduce the wayward wind--so very poetic!!

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/3/2024 9:39:00 AM

So many thanks dear friend. Letting me know the parts of my work that are most striking is helpful in my journey. Your comments always warm my heart Vijay. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 2/3/2024 8:46:00 AM

How gorgeous is this, and iv never tried this form but it looks really interesting. I love your descriptive language and also how youv written so many lines, especially “ Sundrops freckle ocean's surface accenting the ripples that pattern the waves,“ deep and artistic! So creative! Loved this. Pleasure reading your work

Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 2/3/2024 8:57:00 AM

Hello dear Inky. I so appreciate your visits and comments. Thank you for reading and pointing out the lines you like best. Have a great weekend! :)