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Sundress Undress

SUNDRESS UNDRESS Hot day at the beach - time to catch some sun, Maybe also catch some son. She was a twelve year old girl - tousled hair - In a tussle between herself and mum It was too low at the top up there Too high at the bottom - you could see her bum. Pull it up and fail to cover some bits Pull it down and can’t find anywhere it fits Bare midriff, yellow with tiny dots of black. Economical on material mum laughed - Almost all gone at the front, and none at the back. To be honest, it was somewhat daft: They argued - yes I will ; no you won’t; and then - Not at your age; if not at my age, then when? But it was impossible to stop her (so willful ! ) Without actually putting the dress out of reach. She couldn’t stop her from wearing the dress so awful: Girl cringed as mum wiggled it up and down the beach. .................................................................. Written by Sydney Peck For competition THE SUNDRESS (Constance La France )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/9/2011 6:09:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win Sydney in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 9:42:00 AM
You had me laughing out loud, Syd! Congratulations on your win in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/4/2011 8:04:00 AM
Wonderful write here Sydney!Congrats on your win---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Sydney in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:56:00 PM
lol, syd.. your humor can surely bring you the trophy! my best CHEERS for the greeeat win! now, buy her that midriff..:) hugggs
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:04:00 PM
aaack! O_o love the twist you give, here Sydney :) very very witty ;) you got me laughing aloud here-- loved the humor you put in here ;) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Sydney
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:12:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your terrific win in the sundress contest with this awesome entry and wonderful write luv.. enjoy your top ten victory with luv...
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Date: 3/24/2011 4:29:00 AM
Ohh this is just wonderful =P
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Date: 3/24/2011 12:56:00 AM
har har har, syd... your comic streak strikes again! really got a sharp eye for details and a nose that sniffs into my poetic piles of draft.. okay, you can have this one! j.kidding... true delight! winning's best to you! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 3/23/2011 7:03:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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