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Sunburn

The sun was hot, dear Jack did burn He fell asleep and forgot to turn His cheeks do hurt He wears a skirt The fellas asking him out is his only concern

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/16/2015 3:58:00 AM
Ha ha. this is hilarious. love your humour. Good moral to this story. But never get any problem wearing my skirt. thanks for he smile this morning. take good care. Pete.
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Date: 5/15/2015 7:45:00 PM
Young Jack will bloody murder you Tim after spilling his drink all over his sunburn. Thanks for the chuckle Tim - Lindsay
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Date: 5/15/2015 2:23:00 PM
this really burns, lol... enjoyed the skirt, tim.. huggs
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/15/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thanks nette ....next time he needs to apply some sunscreen
Date: 5/15/2015 11:00:00 AM
Ha, Ha, The ending was masterfully inspired. Emile.
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/15/2015 3:22:00 PM
Thanks Emile.....Jack is down in Florida burning it up
Date: 5/15/2015 9:13:00 AM
Lol : )..
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/15/2015 9:15:00 AM
Glad you like it : )) ...poor Santa
Date: 5/15/2015 7:32:00 AM
ha ha ha love it:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/15/2015 7:35:00 AM
Thanks Jan....hope Jack used sunscreen down in Florida.

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