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Sunbeams
Like gleaming gold dust floating in still air, sparkling sunbeams silently stream through bare, neglected, aging, cracked unpainted walls that from my childhood, I can so very vividly recall.
In delightful uninhibited childish glee, I try to grab hold of these lucid illusions persistently. But these artful dodgers expertly evade my eager grasps, like frightened fireflies they swiftly glide away from my obvious trap.
For now, that’s okay though, because in my daydreams I know that one day when I'm all grown up, I’ll magically capture them and fill my fairy cup.
Date: 7/27/2014

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Date: 1/29/2019 12:51:00 PM
Very well written!
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Date: 7/28/2015 4:06:00 AM
This is a great piece of inspirations... Congrats, Kika!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 4/23/2016 10:20:00 AM
Hi Estela, I so very much appreciate your lovely compliments. All the best. Kika
Date: 7/27/2015 12:33:00 AM
I like this. A delightful write with an impish glee. Loved the last 2 lines most. Congratulations, Kika! Proud to join you on the list.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 4/23/2016 10:21:00 AM
Hi KP, thank you so very much - I appreciate your compliments! All the best. Kika
Date: 7/26/2015 11:13:00 PM
Great pen! congrats on top place win Kika!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/26/2015 11:20:00 PM
Thanks very much, Dr. Sharma for your kind words. All the best. Kika
Date: 7/26/2015 4:24:00 PM
Kika,, Congratulations on Your Best Poem #2 win. **SKAT**
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/26/2015 11:20:00 PM
Hi SKAT A, you are so kind to leave me your congratulations. Thanks. very much. Kika
Date: 7/26/2015 3:39:00 PM
so full of beauty Kika congrats on win hugs
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/26/2015 11:21:00 PM
Hi Shadow, I am very happy to place your highly in your contest. Thank you so very much. Kika
Date: 7/26/2015 3:36:00 PM
such vivid imagery Kika many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/26/2015 11:23:00 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so very much - I appreciate your compliments! All the best. Kika
Date: 3/21/2015 5:14:00 PM
KIKA:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 9/6/2014 12:35:00 PM
Ah a very sweet poem Kika and I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/9/2014 7:52:00 PM
Thank you dear Brenda for complimenting my work! All the best, Kika
Date: 9/6/2014 8:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Kika, on your great win! Well deserved with this beautiful piece with lovely imagery! Pandita
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/6/2014 9:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Pandita. Kika
Date: 9/6/2014 5:35:00 AM
Great imagery on the sunbeams, congrats, Kika
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/6/2014 8:21:00 AM
Dr. Ram, thank you kindly! Kika
Date: 9/5/2014 9:50:00 PM
Grats on your win, keep filling your cup with magic, no matter how old you get ;)
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/6/2014 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for your kind compliments. Most of my pieces are based on my childhood memories and I try to keep the magic alive! Kika
Date: 9/5/2014 5:34:00 PM
Congratulations, KIKA , 'thank you for supporting my contest... Stop by my latest blog, "TWILIGHT" if you'd like... Sending hugs to all. <3 LINDA
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Kika Ayala
Date: 9/6/2014 8:19:00 AM
Thank you, PD! I am ecstatic about this win! Have a nice weekend!
Date: 7/29/2014 7:30:00 AM
Kika Words of enchantment and dreams that are full of hope. A journey of wonderment and faith. Thank you for the nice comment on my Back On Track poem
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/29/2014 1:07:00 PM
Robin. thank you so very much I appreciate your compliments!
Date: 7/28/2014 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful poem. So much light and magical! Thank you for reading my poem and leaving feedback.
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/29/2014 1:08:00 PM
Many thanks, Gry! Your comments mean a lot to me!
Date: 7/28/2014 10:11:00 AM
Amazing write.. Soft, sweet and well written! A fine contest entry and inspiring write as well! BBBRAVOOOO!!!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/29/2014 1:10:00 PM
Robert, I really appreciate your kind words complimenting my work. Thanks very much!
Date: 7/28/2014 8:34:00 AM
What beautiful thoughts in a pretty poem... Enjoyed my stopping by today - ~Beautiful!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/29/2014 1:09:00 PM
Hi Anna-Marie, thank you very much for your lovely compliments!
Date: 7/27/2014 2:54:00 PM
Fairy cup -sounds cute, a cup filled with sumbeams - I know this one:D :http://ozoneparkjournal.com/poetry/about-great-tits-apie-zyles/
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/28/2014 7:49:00 AM
Thank you dear Emilija for your sweet compliments which I very much appreciate! Kika
Date: 7/27/2014 12:52:00 PM
Wow.. Absolutely fantastic read! I love it! It's so bright! Looking forward for more!
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Kika Ayala
Date: 7/27/2014 1:59:00 PM
My friend, Ahmed, thank you kindly for your wonderful comments and compliments. I will try my best to come up with some more:-)! Kika

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