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Sun You Are a Real Star

Lying here in early evening light the sun’s going down behind it’s cloud it’s power being evident throughout day effective rays showed before it bowed Through the daytime hours so great makes one melt under it’s shade it’s so powerfully hot for one to bare too much of it will make one to fade Think how far away it is from earth if too near it would burn us up then all of our matter would just melt no more to be only a shell shape cup Thankfully it’s far enough away to harm so we can enjoy it’s many a benefit it spreads itself to different parts and times full of it’s resources never ever to quit Sun indeed you are one real star makes a many bright smiling face ice cream sales go through the roof come back tomorrow to fill our space! (some thoughts while enjoying sunshine on holiday in Italy.)

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Date: 8/4/2016 5:09:00 AM
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 8/4/2016 5:20:00 AM
thanks Probir, you're one the regular commenters on my writing, which I do thank you, blessings, Gordon

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