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Sun Sparkles

Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits Inspiration comes from each reflection The stream goes and flows through some trees and bits Land covers special portion and section Trees have golden orange leaves that filled them Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits Bushes that remained green are quite the gem Seems the ground is alive with yellow pits The sun comes in through the trees with some grit It illumines not just water, but leaves Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits Trees also show off how the red believes Beauty shines right where I stand looking down All this land for a King it sure befits I would surely bring the maker a crown Sun sparkles off the ground where water sits Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/3/2014 6:28:00 PM
a sparkling poem, Russell. Quaterns are a lot of fun. I love seeing that one line moving every time to a different part of the next stanza.
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Russell Sivey
Date: 3/3/2014 9:17:00 PM
Yeah it's fun incorporating this line to all stanzas, but it's also challenging to rhyme. Thank you for your comment.
Date: 3/3/2014 6:22:00 PM
Russell you've described every detail so vividly I can see it...wonderful job....
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Date: 3/2/2014 4:09:00 PM
oh my, russell...this piece glows with such brilliance much like the sun you speak of.. love the energy and beauty of this piece!.. huggs
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Date: 3/2/2014 11:05:00 AM
This poem sparkles as well. Good write.
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Date: 3/2/2014 10:22:00 AM
just beautiful, my friend
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Date: 3/2/2014 5:14:00 AM
I specifically fall for the last stanza,what a beautiful way to end a great work like this;God is good all the times.Kudos Russell.
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Date: 3/2/2014 1:04:00 AM
Our maker deserves a crown..and this king is special cause He gave the kingdom of nature to us..The imagery of the sun is vividly beautiful in this poem..I really can feel its golden shimmer upon me.Awesome!
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