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Sun Shine

Oh, the sun shines and the wind blows the crisp, apple-wind, blows, laughing through the half shorn tresses of the sugar maple trees. Oh, the sun shines and the shadows fall like long gray mufflers, foreshadowing, the wraps of winter winds and frost on dawn's green grasses Oh, the sun shines and the heart sings full and ripe as the pie pumpkins waiting to be picked and the comforters calling from the beds of cuddling children. Oh, let the sun shine for it fills my soul for when the dark of winter persists I will remember this.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/30/2009 6:13:00 PM
I love this piece Deb. It's so evocative of the sun and keeping it with you through the cold winter months. Great poem!
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Date: 10/29/2009 2:02:00 PM
My sun shined so bright after reading this epic of a poem
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Date: 10/29/2009 9:22:00 AM
This beautiful piece of free verse painted very vivid pictures in my mind. I too will remember this when frozen in a winter's kiss. Great writing Deb, Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/28/2009 5:22:00 PM
Lovely poetry Deborah,sun shine is always beautiful and refreshing to the soul.I liked the poetry,great imagery that makes one feel good. Thanks for your comments on mine. Best wishes, Chacko
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Date: 10/28/2009 1:10:00 PM
again your talent is prevalent in this one great write Johnathon
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Date: 10/28/2009 10:18:00 AM
Lovely poem, everyone likes the sun shine. Pam.
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Date: 10/27/2009 5:16:00 PM
I definately keep the sun shine in my heart so winter could come. By then I will have moved far way from here and hope that everything will be ok. Keep writing, Deborah! Love, Gert
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Date: 10/27/2009 10:45:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww yes Deborah. Now it goes to Favs. I know right where it is and I can read it anytime.Thank you for a ~~~Magnificent~~~ read my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2009 8:48:00 AM
this reads like an unfinished song from the 1940's..very vintage in flavor
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Date: 10/27/2009 4:19:00 AM
Deborah, I enjoyed reading your poem this morning but..... it ended before I was ready to stop reading it. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2009 3:35:00 PM
Love the phrase... "laughing through the half shorn tresses"....a wonderful description of a fall tree!! NICE!
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Date: 10/26/2009 2:11:00 PM
Interesting fall write. Keep writing. Sara
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