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Sun Scarred

Mirrored memories, glaring shards, beam countless points of light, glass hard, about my mind. I did not know, you still could reach my soul. Love glow-- thought dead--moons, reflecting off my heart, sun scarred. Copyright, September 1, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/15/2014 1:24:00 AM

wrenching yet beautifully expressed, faye.. thank you for joining my contest with big congrats and hugggs!

Paul Callus

Date: 9/14/2014 3:33:00 AM

I love your take on this contest theme, Faye; it has certainly worked with deserved results. Expressive final line. Congratulations! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/14/2014 1:02:00 AM

Very touching write, brilliant expressions Faye! Had to be a winner! Big congrats!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/13/2014 10:37:00 PM

Brilliant write with a lovely message, Faye. congrats

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/13/2014 7:08:00 PM

Congratulations on this beautiful poem Faye. I always love to read your poetry.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/13/2014 6:32:00 PM

many congrats Faye:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 9/3/2014 5:08:00 PM

Faye you are my number one poet

Faye Gibson
Date: 9/3/2014 9:12:00 PM

Jerry, thank you very much; I consider that a high compliment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2014 3:11:00 PM

Nette is just going to swoon over this one! I wrote a really goofy one. You will see when I ever post it!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/1/2014 10:38:00 PM

A profound piece with a metaphoric message in your last lines. This is brilliantly written Faye. It should do really well in the contest.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/1/2014 2:47:00 PM

Very interesting form and content matter here, Faye. The moon and sun are themes I love to write on. I'm interested in the use of imagery in this piece to reflect on memories and reality. Kindly check your mail! Thank you.