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Sun Never Rises

My days feel like nights My nights never saw the day For sun never rises On clouds so gray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/4/2012 11:19:00 PM
Just make one correction in your second line: replace "seen" with "saw". This little poem looks better with proper grammar.
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Date: 1/22/2012 1:29:00 PM
this isnt bad just wish you would elaborate more.
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Date: 1/22/2012 9:51:00 AM
Sad but well written. A thought we can all relate to.
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Marissa Long
Date: 1/22/2012 9:54:00 AM
Thank you

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