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Sun Moon

Sun shining brightly
like golden ring in blue sky...
spectacular scene

the moon shines in night
like a crown made of diamond...
sky is nature's queen

the sun and the moon
both makes the earth beautiful...
her two ornaments

By:spandan karmakar

Date:23rd Jan 2012

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  1. Date: 7/29/2014 6:03:00 PM
    Spandan... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 12:50:00 AM
    you definitely have a great teacher to write such awesome haiku-Lovely

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 6:47:00 PM
    very good connecting of lines 1 & 2!!! excellent imagery now ask Da's help on the 3rd lines BOY we all have trouble with those 3rd lines..remember no fantasy no imagination only what you actually see, smell, taste or touch..if you were IN the scene. Light & Love Debi

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 5:04:00 AM
    Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

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    Date: 2/9/2012 1:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your comments Samual
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM
    Well done, Spandan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar
    Date: 2/9/2012 2:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Kim for your comments
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 8:47:00 AM
    beautifully done, congrats on your win in the contest

    karmakar Avatar spandan karmakar
    Date: 2/9/2012 2:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Francine for your comments
  1. Date: 1/31/2012 7:36:00 AM
    Congrats. Karmakar on your super win, love the way you turned them into ornaments, beauty for the eyes to see, love,vie

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 9:09:00 PM
    SPAN.. sweet congrats to you; i knew you will do well! shine on!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:25:00 PM
    who just called me a Mother Hen?

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 6:24:00 PM
    Now remember the agreement, Span...I represent you and u send me all the cash prizes!!! ha ha..I will Soup Mail you my address for the Swiss Bank account! :) I am so proud of your success in your first haiku contest. Got a secret for ya too,....Linda Marie is a phenomenal poet and she knows what great poetry is..consider yourself ONE FINE YOUNG POET NOW!! A standing ovation for you, son. APPLAUSE!!! Gwendolen ps..did u get your homework done? Always get that out of the way first....this poetry stuff is addictive. :)

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 4:30:00 PM
    spandan, congrats on your win, welcome to the soup..David

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:54:00 PM
    Hey, was this one of your first contests, Spandan?

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 3:51:00 PM
    Way to go in the winners' circle. a Big congrats to you. Great symbolic poem!!

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:52:00 PM
    Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Spandan. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:20:00 PM
    congrats on success in my contest spandan.. enjoyed entry..thankxxx..luv..

  1. Date: 1/30/2012 1:10:00 PM

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 10:05:00 PM
    Wonderful haiku Spandan, Blessings, bren : )

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 5:22:00 AM
    You gave the sky a feminine glow with this ornate ring and crown, Spandan. I am so thrilled for this most successful nailed the theme of the contest to a T. Executing a strong haiku is like a gymnast perfecting her dismount! A solid landing! Gwendolen

  1. Date: 1/25/2012 1:05:00 AM
    i am getting more fond of you from the outside looking in, span... delicately woven piece worthy of a win... please join the contest... goood stuff!..:) hugggs!