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Sun Moon

Sun shining brightly like golden ring in blue sky... spectacular scene the moon shines in night like a crown made of diamond... sky is nature's queen the sun and the moon both makes the earth beautiful... her two ornaments By:spandan karmakar Date:23rd Jan 2012

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/29/2014 6:03:00 PM

Spandan... A nicely done Haiku.... LINDA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/11/2012 12:50:00 AM

you definitely have a great teacher to write such awesome haiku-Lovely

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/21/2012 6:47:00 PM

very good connecting of lines 1 & 2!!! excellent imagery now ask Da's help on the 3rd lines BOY we all have trouble with those 3rd lines..remember no fantasy no imagination only what you actually see, smell, taste or touch..if you were IN the scene. Light & Love Debi

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/5/2012 5:04:00 AM

Well done. Congrats on your win............S.Ronthorpe

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/9/2012 1:57:00 AM

Thanks for your comments Samual

Kim Merryman

Date: 1/31/2012 2:13:00 PM

Well done, Spandan. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/9/2012 2:00:00 AM

Thanks Kim for your comments

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/31/2012 8:47:00 AM

beautifully done, congrats on your win in the contest

Spandan Karmakar
Date: 2/9/2012 2:02:00 AM

Thanks Francine for your comments

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2012 9:09:00 PM

SPAN.. sweet congrats to you; i knew you will do well! shine on!..:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 6:25:00 PM

who just called me a Mother Hen?....lol.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 6:24:00 PM

Now remember the agreement, Span...I represent you and u send me all the cash prizes!!! ha ha..I will Soup Mail you my address for the Swiss Bank account! :) I am so proud of your success in your first haiku contest. Got a secret for ya too,....Linda Marie is a phenomenal poet and she knows what great poetry is..consider yourself ONE FINE YOUNG POET NOW!! A standing ovation for you, son. APPLAUSE!!! Gwendolen ps..did u get your homework done? Always get that out of the way first....this poetry stuff is addictive. :)

David Williams

Date: 1/30/2012 4:30:00 PM

spandan, congrats on your win, welcome to the soup..David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:54:00 PM

Hey, was this one of your first contests, Spandan?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 3:51:00 PM

Way to go in the winners' circle. a Big congrats to you. Great symbolic poem!!

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 1:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful write, Jon

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 1:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your super win in Linda-Marie's "Hodgepodge Trio"contest Spandan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 1:20:00 PM

congrats on success in my contest spandan.. enjoyed entry..thankxxx..luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 1/30/2012 1:10:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/25/2012 10:05:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Spandan, Blessings, bren : )

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/25/2012 5:22:00 AM

You gave the sky a feminine glow with this ornate ring and crown, Spandan. I am so thrilled for this most successful write...you nailed the theme of the contest to a T. Executing a strong haiku is like a gymnast perfecting her dismount! A solid landing! Gwendolen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/25/2012 1:05:00 AM

i am getting more fond of you from the outside looking in, span... delicately woven piece worthy of a win... please join the contest... goood stuff!..:) hugggs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2012 11:07:00 PM

You have a great poetic life ahead of you writing like this, Spandan. VERY nice.