Sun Dancing
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Poem inspired by a form called triolet form.
The sun shimmers resplendently on a calm sea,
It synchronizes with the glistening ripples;
Its graceful sways captivated the whole of me,
The sun shimmers resplendently on a calm sea.
Its fabulous dance completely makes me happy,
Its silver reflection on sea water tickles,
The sun shimmers resplendently on a calm sea,
Cradling my weary soul, giving hope that sparkles.
March 1, 2014 12.30am
It’s my first try of a triolet poem- 12 syllables per line. I hope I did it right. HAVE A HAPPY AND BLESSED 1ST DAY OF MARCH 2014. Wish you all the best! Big Hugs!
First Place
Contest: Impress Me with a small poem II
Judged: 3/5/14
Sponsor: Poet Giorgio V.
Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2014
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