Sun Dancing

Twirl across the fields in an adoring frenzy. Chill is forgotten. Our feet sing like hummingbirds. Sun fingers tickle our souls. written Jan 6th,2014

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Skat A

Date: 2/11/2014 6:58:00 PM

a nice little smile.. Deb. Love the tickling rays... ~ Love ~ SKAT

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/19/2014 2:59:00 PM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/13/2014 10:58:00 PM

Gorgeous depiction of sun dancing! Congrats, Deb!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/12/2014 5:57:00 PM

Magic imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2014 5:20:00 PM

and another favorite expression, as Barbara mentions hers.....Sun fingers!! love those words! Congratulations!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/12/2014 2:52:00 PM

the wonder of words put together to make "our feet sing"..congrats. BG

Donna Jones

Date: 1/12/2014 2:15:00 PM

This is awesome....congratulations

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/12/2014 11:22:00 AM

Nobody could have written a poem better than this. Congrats on your wonderful win.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/12/2014 8:12:00 AM

Very beautiful, congratulation.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/12/2014 12:28:00 AM

Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Deb

Amanda Reslink

Date: 1/11/2014 11:50:00 PM

This makes me think of that first really nice day of spring:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2014 9:16:00 PM

You really had me with those last two lines. Purely delightful imagery!!! Congrats on second place.

Deb Wilson
Date: 1/11/2014 9:19:00 PM

thank you so much for appreciating my poem Andrea!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2014 8:36:00 AM

Nice joyful expressions, deb

Poet Tacito

Date: 1/6/2014 7:58:00 AM

This piece was filled with such joy & warmth. Wonderful job!

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/6/2014 4:34:00 AM

Brilliant! This is such a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful and harmonious poem this one surely is, Great Work!!