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Sun Dancing

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Sun Dancing

Twirl across the fields
in an adoring frenzy.
Chill is forgotten.
Our feet sing like hummingbirds.
Sun fingers tickle our souls.



written Jan 6th,2014

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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 6:58:00 PM
    a nice little smile.. Deb. Love the tickling rays... ~ Love ~ SKAT

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 2:59:00 PM
    This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

  1. Date: 1/13/2014 10:58:00 PM
    Gorgeous depiction of sun dancing! Congrats, Deb!

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 5:57:00 PM
    Magic imagery! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 5:20:00 PM
    and another favorite expression, as Barbara mentions hers.....Sun fingers!! love those words! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 2:52:00 PM
    the wonder of words put together to make "our feet sing"..congrats. BG

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 2:15:00 PM
    This is awesome....congratulations

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 11:22:00 AM
    Nobody could have written a poem better than this. Congrats on your wonderful win.

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 8:12:00 AM
    Very beautiful, congratulation.

  1. Date: 1/12/2014 12:28:00 AM
    Beautiful write on the theme and congrats on the win, Deb

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 11:50:00 PM
    This makes me think of that first really nice day of spring:)

  1. Date: 1/11/2014 9:16:00 PM
    You really had me with those last two lines. Purely delightful imagery!!! Congrats on second place.

    Wilson Avatar Deb Wilson
    Date: 1/11/2014 9:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you so much for appreciating my poem Andrea!!
  1. Date: 1/6/2014 8:36:00 AM
    Nice joyful expressions, deb

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 7:58:00 AM
    This piece was filled with such joy & warmth. Wonderful job!

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:34:00 AM
    Brilliant! This is such a brilliant write my friend! I truly loved reading this awesome poem this morning! What a delightful piece, such a wonderful and harmonious poem this one surely is, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/6/2014 4:21:00 AM
    Very nice write Deb, Filled my mind with a lovely image....peter