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Just a few thoughts from out on the porch the other morning..Sara
The sun follows the pathway across the heavens Pathway designed by God set in motion by words Jet pathways seen this morn number seven Six of which the jets are long gone One jet still flying toward the sun Southward_northeners going to Florida or some isle Wanting a break from the ice and snow The sun continues on its pathway bringing warmth Continuity that is stable only thing that is trustworthy But even this will come to an end This stabilty of earth and sky We just don't know when Left we are to wonder or just trust Where do I stand when it comes to trust I am not sure_are you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/1/2012 7:50:00 PM
not sure either Sara, but as the sun continues on its path, so shall we move forwards on ours. wishing you the best in The New Year dear poet. you simply glow!
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Date: 12/29/2011 4:15:00 AM
Only in the Lord Sara he's the only sure thing..) here's wishing you a good new year
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Date: 12/28/2011 9:02:00 AM
Happy new year Sara, please keep writing your poetry, it is such an inspiration., harry
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Date: 12/28/2011 6:15:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Sara. I hope you will continue to write and share your poetry with us as always. Happy New Year. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2011 10:54:00 AM
Sara.. you do it again and again.... It is a pleasure to take a visit to your poetry pages. OXOX love Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/27/2011 10:08:00 AM
Love this poem Sara.A good question put by you at the end.
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Date: 12/27/2011 9:27:00 AM
Wonderful write of number seven, it's trustworthy without doubt. Thanks for this new one, my friend.bl
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Date: 12/27/2011 7:38:00 AM
Trust is like crystal. It is beautiful until it's broken.
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