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Sun and the Moon

Sun looked at Moon And said, come and love me Moon looked back And said, this can never be We can never be together We are destined To be alone forever You are from your world And I am from mine We will pass in the night And at the dawn But Ill shine for you And you for me The Sun And The Moon Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 5/57/20

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Date: 5/30/2020 12:39:00 AM
Love this Timothy, so many take the two of them for granted, yet your poem, short but says so much more.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/30/2020 1:27:00 AM
thanks Harry!
Date: 5/29/2020 8:00:00 PM
Hello Timothy … worlds apart but can't live without them - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/30/2020 1:27:00 AM
So true
Date: 5/28/2020 8:49:00 PM
So lovely, Timothy. Two ships in the night. I love how you end your poem with "I'll shine for you And you for me". Love it.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/28/2020 9:43:00 PM
thank you Line
Date: 5/28/2020 11:38:00 AM
So true Timothy, worlds apart never to meet. Good luck in the contest. Hope you're well. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/28/2020 5:15:00 PM
thanks Tom

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