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Sun and Sand Minichu

An Aquatic Ballet Waves cause seagulls to move in harmonic motion Birds of Prey Nautical Stance Orchestrated by the ocean They dance The Sea Suntan Lotion Me An Aquatic Ballet Orchestrated by the ocean Me _________ 01/09/2021 Written for contest, Sun and Sand Minichu Sponser Mohan Chutani

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2021 10:07:00 AM

Creative way to go. Congrats on this winner. Sara

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/3/2021 6:52:00 PM

thank you

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/3/2021 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Evelyn! Love the aquatic ballet. :) Linda

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/3/2021 6:53:00 PM

thanks

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/3/2021 4:11:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting. God bless you.

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/3/2021 6:53:00 PM

thanks I enjoy learning new forms of poetry

Mohan Chutani

Date: 2/3/2021 3:01:00 AM

Evelyn, thanx for participating in my contest and creating a beautiful aquatic ballet on the sandy beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan

Evelyn Swartz
Date: 2/3/2021 6:55:00 PM

Thank you. It was very hard for me to deviate from a rhyming form and to not make the poem romantic. Thanks for the win. I am so honored.