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Sun and Sand Minichu

of vast nature be part hear the salty sea waves rush in with froth and foam steer the heart stretch out on sand merge to make sea, sand and sun home disband go dive swim, walk, sleep, roam live of vast nature be part, merge to make sea, sand and sun home live 6th placement written 05/Jan/2021 Mohan Chutani sponsor Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1

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Date: 2/3/2021 12:04:00 PM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congrats on your place on the winners' list. Sara
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/3/2021 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Sara! Pleased you like it!:)
Date: 2/3/2021 7:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one Krish, A fav for me. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/3/2021 8:45:00 PM
Thanks Linda! making it fav is special! God bless
Date: 2/3/2021 3:13:00 AM
Krish, thanx for participating in my contest and discovering nature's vastness on the beach through your Minichu. Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 2/3/2021 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Mohan! honoured my friend!
Date: 1/7/2021 10:10:00 AM
It always feels good to be a part of nature, one with nature Krishji. A good contender for the contest. I have never tried writing a Minichu format. Will have to try. Have a great day ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/7/2021 11:02:00 AM
Thank you Ani! Yes please do try! It is challenging particularly the last syllable!! no harm in attempting!
Date: 1/6/2021 6:18:00 AM
A scene I never get tired of seeing Krish, the sand and the sound of waves crashing on the shore is so therapeutic. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/6/2021 11:57:00 PM
Thanks Tom! we all evolved from the ocean, hence the attraction! Spent childhood near the ocean! so yes, love it!
Date: 1/5/2021 7:45:00 PM
A very nice minichu, Krish from you!! Take good care, Gershon
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 1/5/2021 9:53:00 PM
Thanks Gershon! sea is our heart beat.

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