Sun and Sand Minichu
of vast nature be part
hear the salty sea waves rush in with froth and foam
steer the heart
stretch out on sand
merge to make sea, sand and sun home
disband
go dive
swim, walk, sleep, roam
live
of vast nature be part,
merge to make sea, sand and sun home
live
6th placement
written 05/Jan/2021
Mohan Chutani sponsor
Minichu format: Total 12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each)
Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 4th stanza consists of repeat of: 1st line of stanza 1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3, Stanza 2: 4,8,2, Stanza 3: 2,4,1, Stanza 4: 6,8,1
Copyright © Krish Radhakrishna | Year Posted 2021
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