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Sun and Sand Minichu

far from wintry England into caressing warmth of a tropical beach sun and sand fun and frolick in a lazy temperate breach uptick recoup recharge, wild peach sloop far from wintry England in a lazy temperate breach sloop 4.1.2021 Note: Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: 1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

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Date: 2/23/2021 12:27:00 AM
Ok don't have to soup mail me Thanks for directions.
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Date: 2/4/2021 1:14:00 PM
Hey, I love how you did your very own sun and sand one!!! thanks for that contest, Mohan.
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Date: 2/3/2021 7:34:00 AM
Your description of the warm and sunny beach reads like you have been there before. Thanks for dropping back by my poem to tell me you liked the change. I do not expect you to change my placement in the contest. I just wanted to make the poem correct but I could have used the term poetic license in what I wrote. Sara
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Date: 1/10/2021 9:21:00 PM
Thank you, Mohan, I was totally confused with the form and this helps. I will give it a try. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/7/2021 4:53:00 AM
thanks for the inspiration , it seems a challenging form I will try and write for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 1/9/2021 6:03:00 AM
Most welcome Jan. A happy new year to you. Best. Mohan

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