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Sun and Moon

If you were the sun And I were the moon I'd lay here silently Fade into you I guess I wanted you more Then what your heart could bare You always said if I was by your side You could climb the highest mountain Streaking sunsets across the sky Painting rainbows across my heart You said there was beauty in my laugh As true beauty came from my kindness You are a dream inside of a dream You are whispers on the wind to my heart Can you not find your way back to me I guess the road of us was too long For your heart to understand 10 25 2012 Wednesday 9 pm

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Ken Carroll

Date: 8/29/2013 11:51:00 PM

Hi Debbie, Wonderful write expressing love found and love lost... Ken..

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/1/2013 12:42:00 AM

Thank you Ken ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2013 1:42:00 PM

gosh, you are VERY good at the romantic poem genre. I love this one. A fave!

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/11/2013 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Andrea ;}

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 12/6/2012 4:54:00 AM

I LOVE IT ,KEEP IT UP.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/13/2012 4:26:00 PM

Your "spur of the moment" words cast a spell reading the message in this. Has a feeling of angst and acceptance that leaves me feeling sad.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/13/2012 5:39:00 PM

Thanks for reading Liz ;} yes it is a bit sad, wanting more, I've been single about 6 yrs now. Before that We were together 17 years.

Skat A

Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM

A very nice combination' hopefuly one can open their eyes, to everything that resides on the side of them. A very tasteful but sad poem. Have a nice day.~SKAT~

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/11/2012 5:35:00 PM

Thank ya SKAT ,,,, this is made up spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2012 4:11:00 PM

Can it be more gorgeous .... Debbie, so glad I got to read this poem today, thank you! oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/9/2012 5:46:00 PM

Oh thank you Anne - Lise ,,, spur of the moment poem,, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} I wise you a blessed day ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2012 6:39:00 PM

Hello Debbie, wow...fading into each other... Now this is a verse I'd love to take notion with my fiance... when life faded in different directions... enjoyed..pd

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/6/2012 3:46:00 AM

Hey Poet,,,,, thank you for always reading my words,,,, I wrote this on the spree of the moment as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome day .

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 11/5/2012 7:40:00 AM

lovely poem friend Debbie..i like it. thanks fro sharing :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/5/2012 10:13:00 AM

Well thank you Maria,,,,, I wrote it on spree of the moment, as I heard the two words sun and moon ;} you have an awesome !

Bhavna Khemlani

Date: 11/2/2012 11:57:00 PM

Hello Debbie, A nice one, some emotions are surely inexpressive and beyond our understanding. I like this.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/4/2012 4:10:00 PM

Thank Bhavna,,,, it was a spree of the moment write as I heard the words " sun and moon in my head. you have an awesome day " OK' ;}

Robert Pettit

Date: 11/2/2012 10:54:00 PM

Nice imaginative write. Those two proximal heavenly bodies have inspired many great writes through the ages. This is one more for that very long list.

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/2/2012 11:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Robert,,,, a complement like tat from you is awesome. Because I know "you" are a very good writer ;}