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- Sun and Heat -

I would give you the sun If you were scared in the dark I would stop the rain If you needed heat I would have captured a star To light up your path I would give you the rainbow If your days were gray With this little poem I will just say: I am here for you A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/11/2017 3:17:00 PM

A divine piece Anne-Lise :-) The most beautiful poem I have read in a long while. I just love the pure honesty of your words...A poetic love note from your heart.:-) A special fave, 7++++ many blessings to you, lynn

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/12/2017 7:52:00 AM

- Nice you enjoy this little poem, Lynn :) - Many thanks for the visit, a 7 + fav. - greatly appreciate it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin

Date: 9/8/2014 2:48:00 PM

Nice poetry from a sweetheart. Love, daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2014 2:58:00 PM

- Thank you Daver for reading my "old" :) poem today. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/8/2014 7:40:00 AM

thanks for this write Anne-Lise, really sums you up well, hope you're having great day and someomne's looking out for you, God bless, Gordon

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/8/2014 7:42:00 AM

- Thanks for the lovely comments and visits ............ always nice to see you, Gordon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 12/22/2012 9:22:00 AM

You are so good, Anne-Lise. And I like that you are always there for everybody. That is a virtue - one that cannot be had if it wasn't given. Treasure you, dear friend. Love ya, Toquyen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/22/2012 10:36:00 AM

Thank you my sweet friend,Toquyen!! // Anne-Lise :))

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/10/2012 2:38:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading all of your poems. Please keep sharing them.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2012 2:42:00 PM

All of them????Wow ...thank you Joann,and thanks for comments. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Richard Mcclellan

Date: 1/16/2012 4:42:00 PM

Very nice poem Anne. Would be nice if there was a little more rhyming, maybe adding the word "some" to the "if you needed heat" would flow better... just wondering... lol like "if you needed some heat" or warmth... some warmth.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/17/2012 6:24:00 AM

Thank you Richard,and thank you for reading it.Yes I wil read;"What If"- oxox love Anne-Lise

Richard Mcclellan
Date: 1/16/2012 4:57:00 PM

You inspired me, read my "What If" poem....

Andre Rogers

Date: 1/16/2012 1:34:00 AM

GREAT READ...Keep em coming!;-)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/16/2012 3:10:00 AM

Thank you Andre.oxox Anne-Lise

M.I.A .

Date: 1/9/2012 5:59:00 PM

aawww, so need it right now. thank you for this poem Anne, hope i can return the wonderful gesture ~.~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/10/2012 3:19:00 AM

Thank you Mia for reeding my poem.:)oxox love Anne-Lise

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/20/2011 12:03:00 PM

This poems just pours how dedicated you are to your friend..going to any extreme to be there. I love the idea that you would get him or her a star or a rainbow..CAN I SIGN UP TO BE YOU R NEW FRIEND?? I love these benefits! ha Great flow,,wonderful free verse. Gwendolen

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/20/2011 12:17:00 PM

Yes you can, my friend. Thank you! OXOX Love Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/15/2011 3:16:00 PM

Good message and well put! How are things is Norway? I am writng form NEw York City. Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/20/2011 12:20:00 PM

Hi. Norway is cold, snow and nerly Christmas. A peaceful Christmas I wish for you. OXOX Hugs Anne-Lise

Steven Cooke

Date: 12/11/2011 3:41:00 PM

Hello Norway. I have read some of your poems and i like this one a lot. excellent write. last time I visited your country, oslo, I was on a cruise ship called Marco polo. i remember the beer was very expensve.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/12/2011 10:25:00 AM

Yes the beer is VERY expensive i Norway!!!! (every thing in Norway is expensve)....But I love to live here. Thank you for reeding my: Sun and heat. Welkom back to my poem and Norway. OXOX Anne-Lise

John-Ovan.P. Hull

Date: 12/9/2011 7:54:00 AM

Sounds like it says all it needs to, and in a great style too!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/9/2011 10:39:00 AM

Thank you for reeding my poem. Love from Norway and Anne-Lise OXOX

James Fraser

Date: 12/7/2011 1:07:00 PM

Words from a warm heart indeed Anne, nice one :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/7/2011 1:49:00 PM

Thank you James. And thank you for reeding my poem. OXOX Anne-Lise (I hope I have a warm heart)

John Aaron Green

Date: 12/6/2011 1:42:00 PM

that was awsome,,,,very nice,,,,seems you are very talented.....

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2011 2:24:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem. Hug from Anne-Lise

Daver Austin

Date: 12/6/2011 12:24:00 PM

A very generous inspiration. Love it. daver

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2011 12:57:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem. Love Anne-Lise

Lizzie Treetop

Date: 12/5/2011 7:47:00 PM

What lovely thoughts. X Lizzie T

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2011 12:58:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem.Love Anne-Lise

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/5/2011 5:55:00 PM

This shows that you have a loving heart. Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2011 12:59:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem.Love Anne-Lise

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/5/2011 1:20:00 PM

* "LOVE BE THE WARMTH AMID A COLD WINTERS DAY * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL ANNE-LISE * LOVE BE THE SUN UPON AN OVERCAST GRAY DAY * LOVE BE THE STARS FALLING AS SNOWFLAKES INTO THE ENDLESS JOY OF THE ONE THEY LOVE * YOUR BEAUTIES LOVING PAINTING WOULD BE AS ALL OF THE ABOVE * SOOO VERY SOFT * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 12/6/2011 1:00:00 PM

Thank you for reading my poem.Love Anne-Lise