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A sunny day it was today,
makes a change
from being grey.
Last week
nothing but rain,
great to see the sun again!
Hope tomorrow's just as good.
Let's have a summer,
like we should!
Like it was years ago,
summer sun
and winter snow.
Living here,
it's mostly cold.
I will move,
when I get old.
Anywhere with sun will do.
The south of France
or Timbouctou.
Stick me in the oven
until I'm done.
C'mon nature
bring on the sun!

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  1. Date: 8/4/2013 8:06:00 PM
    Got to disagree on this one, I am not a fan of the tremendous heat, ugh! I love cool days, overcast is okay. I lived in Germany for a while so I know what it's like not to see the sun for some time. I didn't mind -it made those rare sunny days special, which is why I like this poem :) MC

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Nicely done a light hearted poem a joy to read,,, imagery great and great flow and rhythm,,, well done, blessings sueellen11

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 2:05:00 PM
    Is there room in the oven for me? If cold and old are states of mind I've been a geezer for years!

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 6:17:00 AM
    nicely penned Jenny....I enjoted the read