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a serene light entered the room I'd catered to the empty brass chalice near the crowded foyer the light guided me beyond my self consciousness fondly I'd awaited a sultry vibe in an instant a brilliant groove bestowed the untimely hue approaching my senses while this light moved forward dancing daintily between solace and mirth suddenly the light began to release an enriching glow that consumed me like a garment of warmth tenderly I sighed craving the mere brightness of a sullen calm

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/18/2012 5:48:00 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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Date: 2/17/2012 8:25:00 AM
A poem that readily grasps its' reader. "enriching glow...is quite nice. Very nice. Thx, Jan
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Date: 2/17/2012 7:57:00 AM
packed with imagery, nice work! Cindy
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