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Summertime

So many memories I have are summer-colored, like those walking-down-the-lane days recalled in various hues of green. Green for Grandpa’s cornfields spread all around us and green for the grass on which my sisters and I used to run and play. Besides that color green, which prettily surrounded me through all my childhood, I think a favorite memory would be the colors of one lovely day spent with my family, the family created by my spouse and me and a day our kids were young. We lived near San Francisco. Few troubles plagued us then and I loved our short time in California! One summer day at last we went to see the beach of Santa Cruz. I don’t remember details of everything we did. We walked along the boardwalk, naturally. I’m sure the kids, both pre-teens, enjoyed the rides. Even I was every bit as excited as the two of them. I’m sure my spouse and I took pictures, ate good-tasting food and watched our children doing things all children love to do. But what stood out for me was our time spent on the beach and how we all jumped up to greet each wave that tumbled toward us time and time again to knock us down. What pure pleasure in the splashes of blue that fun-filled day, the blue of the Pacific, which chilled me at the start until I warmed to it as the yellow sun in blue of sky above smiled down on us. Yes, the blue of sky and water and the constant shining yellow of the sun: those would be the colors of my favorite summer memory - when times were good and we were young and simply having fun. For the Summertime Contest of Janis Thompson

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Date: 8/10/2019 12:39:00 PM
It was really fun to read your poem of summertime fun Andrea!
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Date: 8/6/2019 12:02:00 PM
I feel like I was there. Lovely!
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Date: 8/6/2019 12:37:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece. Art in motion, just near the surface of a song. Lovely write. Ann
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Date: 7/5/2016 3:36:00 PM
This is so sweet Andrea. Co on your placement in the contest my friend. I hope you are enjoying time with your son. ; )
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Date: 7/5/2016 2:56:00 PM
A 7 for this winning poem that makes me smile and say "Ahh," Andrea. Janice
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Date: 7/5/2016 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations and thanks for being in the contest.....
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Date: 5/1/2014 6:20:00 PM
Such a heart warming write here Andrea many Happy thanks..'
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Date: 7/28/2013 2:42:00 PM
After a very long time of reading poetry, I enjoyed reading this lovely poem today.
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Modupe Sefunmi
Date: 7/28/2013 2:48:00 PM
*I meant after a very long time of not reading poetry
Date: 7/27/2013 5:41:00 AM
Andrea so enjoyed this delightful summer day of fun. It flowed so beautiful, I could almost sing the rhythm. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 7/26/2013 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. How are you? Just dropping by to have a read of some poems. Haven't been on site for a year. Take care, hope all is well. Lee
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Date: 7/25/2013 9:55:00 PM
hello, ANDREA the poem is hot and Awesome... congrats with your summer time poem...love Linda
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Date: 7/25/2013 6:53:00 PM
Andrea, I loved being in your happy moments while reading this exquisite heartfelt poem. Congratulations on your well deserved win:)
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Date: 7/25/2013 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot Andy, i always know you will be on the winners list xx
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:27:00 PM
wonderful write Andrea....congrats on your win
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Date: 7/24/2013 4:41:00 PM
Those were the days Petal, on holiday playing with the kids, great times, miss them. I see congratulations are in order, hmmmm old poem though lol. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/24/2013 2:57:00 PM
Andrea - I was stationed in that area for a year and have been to Santa Cruz and Monterrey which I fell in love with...We were dry-docked in Vellejo and had an apartment there...Where did y'all live?...Congrats - Tim
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2013 3:46:00 PM
Hayward, CA. UGGGG
Date: 7/24/2013 1:29:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, a lovely gift of a poem. Thank you for the support my contest. Stop by and enjoy my blog: (A Lavender Day-- summer contest) winners. Have yourself an awesome day. LUV ~SKAT
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Date: 7/24/2013 12:49:00 PM
Congratulations again, Andrea. I love the California coast, and regret not having spent more time there. You really are the most prolific writer on poetry soup, and your wins are much deserved... Jack
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Date: 7/24/2013 12:23:00 PM
As a native Californian, I have spent many summers at beaches nearby, and also in So. Calif. where I lived when a child. There is such a difference between the northern coast and the southern. Loved the memories you tell in your poem!
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:10:00 PM
I lived in L. A. about 6 yrs. hung out at Venice beach a lot. a few of my nieces still live there. ,,,, when I said I write words/ poems 5-6 a day sometimes. I don't like a lot of them. Oh ya, I do like this poem, I see why it won ;} glad you liked my Troll poem ;}
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Date: 5/4/2012 5:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "A Summer Memory" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/30/2012 12:28:00 PM
wonderfully well written Andrea......! ~sashi
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Date: 4/30/2012 11:56:00 AM
What a happy memory Andrea. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/30/2012 2:59:00 AM
pure gold!...my hands are tied, so here's a generic sweet cheers to you for a great win... :) huggs and love, andie!
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Date: 4/29/2012 9:50:00 PM
lovely memory you've painted, congrats on your win Andrea
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