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Summer's Song - Visual Number 4

When summer's beauty's in full view remember that it sings our song, the song I sang when courting you. When summer's beauty's in full view it seems our marriage vows renew. This theory simply can't be wrong, when summer's beauty's in full view remember that it sings our song. May 24, 2015

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Date: 6/27/2015 1:45:00 AM
Lawrence, Congratulations on having your poem featured this past week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/13/2015 8:40:00 PM
This is so sweet, Lawrence! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Lawrence Eberhart
Date: 6/22/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thanks.. had to comment on your limerick.
Date: 6/13/2015 6:24:00 PM
Lawrence, Congratulations on your LOVELY SUMMER TRIOLET ----- SKAT :-)
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Date: 6/13/2015 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for the reminder not to let the noises of living drown out "that song". Well done and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 6/13/2015 5:34:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Lawrence:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/13/2015 12:48:00 AM
Lawrence, glad to see a new member on my winners' list. I just love how you developed your theme to go with visual number four! Congrats!
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Date: 6/7/2015 5:30:00 PM
such a beautiful flow to your summer song Lawrence - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx soupmail xx
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