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Summers Heat

` Exhaled sonnets call torrid on the eve Breaths a lofty soar, luring thirsted sighs Moistened drizzled flesh, sunset’s searing weave Motions play beneath tropic amber skies Lips of dampened dreams, meeting by the shore Moonbeams touch your face, eyes of heaven’s glow Whispers echo soft, melting ever pure Fingers tracing curves, passions endless flow Lulled as blushing waves drench our longing skin Stardust wishes cast, lingering above Promised minutes sing, harmonies begin As we lie alone, deep within our love Moans collect the wind, endings come to meet Lost within the tide, summer’s sultry heat 6/9/20 For the Summers Heat Poetry Contest Sponsored by John Hamilton

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2020 9:01:00 AM

Very Romantic Chris.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/10/2020 9:22:00 AM

Hi Chris, this sonnet is so romantic as it should be, congrats on your win:) hope you are doing well:)

Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend. I am doing fine. Thank you for asking

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2020 4:43:00 PM

a superb sonnet... I struggle with writing this form you make it look so easy, many congrats on your win Chris, hope you are keeping ok:-) hugs jan xx

Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:14:00 AM

Thank you so very much Jan.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2020 7:08:00 PM

Simply Beautiful.

Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:14:00 AM

Thank you my sweet friend.

Gayle Rodd

Date: 6/19/2020 9:34:00 PM

Be still my heart! Just beautiful!

Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so very much Gayle.

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/19/2020 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations for this beautiful poem shining to the top, Chris. I hope you have a nice day :)

Chris Green
Date: 7/10/2020 11:13:00 AM

Thank you Heidi. I appreciate your kindness always to me.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/13/2020 6:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your top spot Chris! This is gorgeous and it reminds me of an artist called Chris who had given his voice for a song invoking similar emotions :)

Chris Green
Date: 6/15/2020 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment Aditi

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/13/2020 1:49:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful first placement Chris. So nothing certainly to read your poetry again. Blessings xxoo

Chris Green
Date: 6/15/2020 11:00:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/13/2020 10:59:00 AM

This is a truly beautiful write Chris, just what I was looking for, scored 39 out of 40 almost perfect! Congrats on a fine win, hope to see more of you!

Chris Green
Date: 6/15/2020 11:00:00 AM

Thanks John, it was not an easy poem to write, I am thrilled I scored so well.

Sandra Adams

Date: 6/11/2020 7:39:00 AM

this is beautiful Chris... I am sure John will love it as much as I do... good to see you writing again, best wishes in the contest... hugs

Chris Green
Date: 6/11/2020 9:13:00 AM

Thank you Sandy. I am glad you liked it. Just passing through...

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 6/11/2020 7:27:00 AM

Such a beauty, friend - Bless you with many more wonderful writes. Love to you, Gina

Chris Green
Date: 6/11/2020 9:12:00 AM

Thank you so much Gina.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/9/2020 8:52:00 PM

Beautiful imagery on the shores of passion, Chris. A wow and fave from me...hugs, Rhonda xx

Chris Green
Date: 6/10/2020 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda, I appreciate your kindness.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/9/2020 7:35:00 PM

"Moans collect the wind" is one of the most fabulous lines ever. The whole write is wonderful of course ;), xomo!

Chris Green
Date: 6/10/2020 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this.