Summer's End

Autumn Appears Changing life At summer's end Autumn

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Sandra Adams

Date: 11/10/2013 6:00:00 PM

nicely penned, you captured the picture well....:)

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2013 3:46:00 PM

Yes........this is perfect !!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2013 1:34:00 PM

love this write - interesting form too, my friend. Congrats on your wins

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 6:59:00 PM

Yep, you GOT it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2013 12:11:00 PM

This is simply brilliant, quite the awesome write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this harmonious poem this afternoon! What a powerful piece, such an amazing poem, Great Work!!

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 11/9/2013 7:48:00 AM

Nicely done Sara. Loved this!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/8/2013 5:43:00 PM

a gracful way of expressing summer's farewell.. missing this season already as we are now having the worst typhoon of the year, sara... beautiful!..:) huggs

Nocturnal Poet

Date: 11/8/2013 10:05:00 AM

hi Sara i'm mahima from India and even here we are wearing jackets AND IT IS REALLY COLD HERE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/8/2013 8:16:00 AM

Good morning, Sara. .. well no doubt about it... Summer is gone. Today I'm wearing a jacket. .hugs. .Linda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2013 7:51:00 AM

My center word is changing..Sara