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Summer's End

The breeze has stirred the trees with tender strains of promises. Refrains we could not keep. But left behind, a fervent song remains, in fields of grass, where summer goes to sleep. Our silhouettes, once sketched beneath the sky, of fingers, gently placed upon my breast, are only dreams I've kept. And now I sigh from memories the years have laid to rest The seasons do recall. Who could forget the blush of gold upon the summer's cheek? Those days are gone, without regret, but yet each dawn brings back the youth we long to seek When summer's gone, and we, as well must go, we'll rest our hearts in leaves of afterglow _____________________________________________________________ For Francine's Contest: Summer's End -- 8/25/13

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Date: 10/30/2013 4:54:00 PM
Beautiful, Carrie! The layout is very fitting to the topic. Congrats!
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Date: 10/30/2013 12:05:00 PM
wow.. awesome win.... SKAT
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Date: 10/29/2013 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your Summer's End Win...Pd
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Date: 10/27/2013 5:53:00 PM
Beautiful and very descriptive. Ccongratulations Carrie. right up there where it belongs. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/29/2013 8:48:00 AM
Your poem is beautifully crafted with succinct rhythm and comely flow.
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Date: 8/27/2013 11:44:00 AM
Ahhh!! The poetic quality of this one is wonderful..It has great rhythm, rhyme and flow..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:03:00 PM
I like this poem. Beautiful description and good choice of words.
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Date: 8/26/2013 5:17:00 PM
You described it quite beautifully leaving out any negative feelings of losing summer! Great entry for the contest.
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Date: 8/26/2013 6:11:00 AM
- Carrie, thank you for your beautiful poem ..... Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2013 2:02:00 AM
this is so beautiful, makes summer's end all the more welcoming when poetry about it is as good as this...
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Date: 8/26/2013 12:28:00 AM
Who would not like to be in such a lap of nature? Summers's refuge has a good scent if one has choice for... Carrie
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