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Summer's End

The earth looks tired Harvest home, the silos full Dust swirls in the breeze Birds inspect the dry rubble Hills long burnt by the sun, wait
Barbara Gorelick 7/11/11 Brown..for Nette's color contest

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Date: 7/18/2011 8:02:00 AM
You seem to always depict wonderfully descriptive visuals in so few words. To do so my poems become long winded stories... You are very talented.
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:56:00 PM
Many congrats on your wins, Barbara : )
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Date: 7/14/2011 8:08:00 PM
wow, what a great way to do brown, Barbara. I had forgotten this color was in the contest and was trying to figure out what it was, but this poem surely depicts it! Congratulations on your beautiful tanka's win.
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Date: 7/14/2011 2:01:00 PM
I did have a brown phase....I think I was brown paired with orange in my late teens early 20's and it does look great with a tan! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/14/2011 7:32:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of nette,Barbara
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Date: 7/14/2011 6:12:00 AM
An excellent piece and win my poet friend...love Michael
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Date: 7/14/2011 5:51:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Barbara in Nette's "Color My World" Contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 10:11:00 PM
Sensational Tanka, Barbara. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:37:00 PM
Great Tanka..Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/13/2011 3:50:00 PM
Congrats BG on a fantastic win in color my world with this excellent expression on brown luv..
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:31:00 PM
lovely lilting lines of beauty BG .. good luck in the contest .. a sure fire winner luv..
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