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Summer's coming

Some days the Spring is cold and grey
And drizzling rain is no surprise.
It seems that nature's lost her way
But soon the Summer sun must rise.
        While rain washed blooms can find no bees
        A worm is still a blackbird's prize.
        The sparrows fuss and skulk in trees
        But soon the Summer sun must rise.
And what of you my nature's child,
Will I find love inside your eyes?
I love to watch you running wild
But soon the Summer sun must rise.
        Some days the Spring is cold and grey
        But soon the Summer sun must rise.

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  1. Date: 6/13/2010 8:57:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph

  1. Date: 6/12/2010 11:40:00 AM
    Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer! Love , Adeleke

  1. Date: 6/9/2010 11:33:00 AM
    Many congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette

  1. Date: 6/7/2010 7:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Jeff. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/6/2010 6:18:00 PM
    Nice use of imagery to share your thought. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 10:45:00 AM
    You capture the warmth and magical transition from spring to summer in this eloquent verse, Jeff! So beautiful! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/10/2009 4:37:00 AM
    The list of forms available here being very limited ... This is a Kyrielle sonnet, iambic tetrameter with a French style rhyme and repeat line scheme of AbaB cbcB dbdB AB the repeated lines being the capital letters, AabB etc rhyming is also allowed and there ought to be a volta in a decent place and the, unrhymed, couplet needs to make sense.