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Summered Autumn Winter Bite

09-25-2015 Summered Autumn Winter Bite Abundant harvest fall growth cycled lay gather send a wheeler paid festive heir praise life Shortening days kneads winter forward home stead deli stock stack flue baked chopped butchered cords A shivering morning turns to light snow while unseasoned eyes study the hoar frost web of an architect; built during warmer wet days now slowly legging her icy fingers across an exposed neck the capture sweet with summer yield and autumn fill

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Skat A

Date: 5/28/2016 12:16:00 PM

Nice to see this one again...skat-- :)

Skat A

Date: 9/30/2015 11:19:00 AM

Rawly, congratulations on your wonderful win. SKAT LOVE

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/30/2015 12:03:00 AM

Lovely poem Rawly, full of wonderful images! Congrats on big win!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/29/2015 5:30:00 PM

a beautiful first poem and a winner in the contest - many congrats Rawly I look forward to reading more of your poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/27/2015 9:02:00 PM

Rawly, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 9/27/2015 3:09:00 PM

Rawly, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2015 9:22:00 AM

- Hey Rawly :) - Welcome with your first poem here on P- Soup - Hope your stay will give you much pleasure - I've been here since 11/26/2011 ....... it is a pleasure to share poems and read what others write - I wish you good luck :) - Nice to "meet" you :) - // Anne-Lise :)