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SUMMER WEDS WINTER icy angels fall they coat white the earthly grounds lovers rest up-close thawing the cold-blooded air summer heat weds winter chill _______________________________ Visual #7 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest Name: Get Romantic Placed 6th O.E.Guillermo 8:17 pm, March 04, 2015

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Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:49:00 PM

Wonderful! Grats on your win ;)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/12/2015 8:07:00 AM

thanks much Cassie. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 1:32:00 PM

Congrats on this great win!! Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:42:00 AM

thanks much Sara... :)!

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:14:00 PM

Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:40:00 AM

Skat, thanks much! :D!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:59:00 AM

Hello Olive, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:39:00 AM

weeeeee.. ! thanks much LOlly Linda.. :D!!! hugs!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 8:00:00 PM

Wow...wonderful, romantic imagery, Olive! I love how you wed the winter's chill with their "summery" heat. Congrats and well done! Hugs, Rhonda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:38:00 AM

thanks much Rhonda.. :)! weeee I saw yours too and i love the first line.. :)! Shield of stars eh.. :D!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:03:00 PM

beautifully romantic imagery Olive I love your take on the picture many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:36:00 AM

thanks much JAn.. :) COnrats too I see you are on the winner's list.. :D!

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2015 2:55:00 PM

Congratulations Olive_eloi!! Pleased to have you by my side on the winners' list:) Beautiful Tanka...lovely imagery...striking final line. Top marks! Hugs // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:35:00 AM

thanks much PAul.. :) hugs and hugs!.. :D!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 6:17:00 AM

mahal na ito tanka>Congrats eloi>Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:34:00 AM

thanks much Rajat.. :)! so appreciate your drop by.. :)!

Kp Nunez

Date: 3/7/2015 12:59:00 AM

Congrats Olive! Hugs and smiles...:D Kim

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2015 12:33:00 AM

Hugs and smile KIm.. :) thanks.. :D!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:03:00 AM

Olive, the idea of this tanka is just wonderful. My only advice would be to use an S on Wed. Summer "weds" winter. The entire poem is in the present tense, and I was wanting to see the ending line be the same way. I really like what you were saying. congrats.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/7/2015 4:57:00 AM

thANKS Andrea for the placement... :)

Kamran Rashid

Date: 3/4/2015 3:55:00 PM

A WARMTH OF LOVE...OCEAN OF GOODNESS#lovd reading this...as its oll human to feel cold and hot..but to get words isn''t really in evry ones part#

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/7/2015 4:56:00 AM

thanks much for stopping by... :) God bless us all..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2015 2:19:00 PM

vivid imagery, eloi... hope you got my soupie.. paki send naman ang cell mo.. miss ya!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:54:00 AM

weeee I got your soupie Nette.. :) I'll message you one of this days.. :) I'll be there in Manila next week for some errands that I need to do.. :) thanks much for stopping by... :)!

James Fraser

Date: 3/4/2015 1:38:00 PM

The Summer of the East weds the Winter of the West. Love the take on Visual 7 Oliz, good luck in the contest, hugs, Dino ;-) xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 6:53:00 AM

thanks much James.. :)! weeeeeeeeeee!

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/4/2015 9:51:00 AM

A poetic look at a moment in time as one encompasses the grandeur of nature and our place within it. Emile. #7

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/6/2015 3:59:00 AM

thanks Emile.. :) I appreciate you dropping by my humble poems.. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2015 9:06:00 AM

Interesting work for the contest ..Way to go ..A snow blanket isn't a good place to play is it..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 3:46:00 PM

thanks much to Sara.. :) I appreciate your visits too.. :)!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2015 7:05:00 AM

- A lovely visual, Olive - Good luck in contest !- hugs Anne-Lise :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 3:44:00 PM

thanks anne Lise.. :) i am always pleased to read your comment..

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/4/2015 6:40:00 AM

Enjoyed this, great imagery. Hugs Janet

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/4/2015 7:42:00 AM

thanks much JAnet.. :)! hugs too!