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Summer Vacation

Bags were all packed Wearing my black shades on With red pants and brown shirt I was traveling alone. Hot wind blew On my white forehead Trees were swaying I wanted to dance. Heard the waves Oh beautiful Boracay! Saw astonishing glitters Amazing white sands. I so felt it! Summer was bit thrilling Relaxing and cool Oh summer vacation! April 12,2015

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/9/2015 7:46:00 PM

Oh Yes, them summer vacations are coming soon :) Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 6:53:00 PM

Lei, congratulations in Shadow's contest. Forever SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2015 6:23:00 PM

sounds wonderful lei - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 5/8/2015 6:15:00 PM

very nice Lei congrats on placing hugs

Funom Makama

Date: 4/14/2015 10:56:00 AM

I had to read this again to fully absorb the beauty of your lines. Your words are smooth and mental friendly. My innerself jerk to your written expressions and I just cannot stop loving this beautiful page. Definitely a 7