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Summer Tempest Oncoming tempest Charges the air with ion Strong wind gusts predicted soon Torrents of rain fall Like a river coming down Flooding sidewalks and sewers A rainbow appears Promise sign that seems to say "The city’s survived the storm." 7/15/16 For" A Perfect Storm"

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Date: 7/24/2016 1:06:00 PM
I like the line "Promise sign that seems to say"..Life today puts it to seems instead of we have survived the storm..Enjoyed reading your work..Very effective picture and lines..Thanks for the honor of being in your winners' list..I appreciate you reading and finding my work worthy of being there..Sara
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Date: 7/24/2016 2:12:00 PM
Thanks, Sara.....yes, that is life today, You saw something that I did not see......
Date: 7/23/2016 8:08:00 PM
Janis, beautifully penned Choka and I am loving it 7 ~
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Date: 7/24/2016 2:13:00 PM
Thanks....
Date: 7/19/2016 2:38:00 PM
I love rainbows appearing after storms. Such a sign of hope. Thanks for sharing a model of what you expect from us for the contest, Janis.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/19/2016 11:21:00 PM
Good luck in the contest.
Date: 7/18/2016 1:25:00 PM
thanks for the inspiration Janis I will try and write one for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Janis Thompson
Date: 7/18/2016 2:56:00 PM
Good luck, Jan

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