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Summer Tanka

childhood summers pop beneath mischievous feet bubbles tar my toes sticky steps pull up dry grass feed for blackened sheep and soles May 16, 2016 for SUMMER LOVIN' - Short Form Poetry - Poetry Contest

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Date: 5/21/2016 12:15:00 PM
- Congratulations on your Summer poems, Rita - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/20/2016 7:25:00 PM
This was a really nice description of that sticky tar!! I love that second line!!! Congrats in my contest.
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/20/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank you! Glad to be a part of the contest!
Date: 5/16/2016 8:22:00 PM
Great take on contest Rita, best wishes...
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Rita A. Simmonds
Date: 5/20/2016 11:10:00 PM
Thank you!

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