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Summer Sunset

S cenes of a vivid landscape are nakedly draped. U nder a canopy I stood. M emories of yesterday are not too far. M y mind is transient of short-lived thoughts. E ach vessel that has dock, asked for morning to come once more. R iding high on surfboards, the visitors come ashore. S unday and the weekend have ended. U shering in the new workday, we begin to relax. N ice to know we have a peace of mind. S uch pleasure we partake without being attack. E veryone feels the heat at his or her backs. T his is the summer and therefore, party time. _____________________________________/ PENNED ON JUNE 15, 2014!

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Date: 7/1/2014 7:33:00 AM
I know that's right, Party Time!!LOL. Lets go, i'll bring the Jungle Juice and Edibles & have a Barbecue, Incredible!! Awesome Acrostic baby girl, on to my favorites!!:JP)
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/1/2014 12:04:00 PM
Thanks Jared for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Date: 6/27/2014 9:21:00 PM
Beautifully penned. Love the picture you've painted in this poem. The surboards sound life fun uh? A great piece of poetry! Thank you for sharing!
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Suzanne C. Goudreau
Date: 6/28/2014 5:31:00 AM
thank you Verlena!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 6/27/2014 9:34:00 PM
Thanks for your supportive remarks Suzanne and I like your poetry writing style immensely... Stay true to you... Verlena

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