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Summer Sun

Kids tucked in their beds Moon peering from the backstage Lingering longer Taking in the Earth’s beauty Summer sun leaves grudgingly Written on 08/02/2016 Contest:'One Nature Tanka' by Rick Parise

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Date: 8/5/2016 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your high placement Sara...
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Date: 8/4/2016 10:37:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/4/2016 9:39:00 PM
Hi Sara, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Date: 8/4/2016 6:54:00 PM
very beautiful Sara congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2016 6:08:00 PM
wonderful Sara...congrats on the win
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this creative tanka, Sara, Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 8/4/2016 5:27:00 PM
So cute!!!Congrats for your win.
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