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Dragonfly lands atop the stick that stands in gently flowing stream. Bubble trains and dried leaf boats blow and briefly strand before they slip between the stepping stones then skip beyond, where quieter waters flow. Speckled trout, dappled thrice, with sunshine spots, just seen through mirror shimmered waters swim between the Crowfoot’s tangled shocks waving to and fro to follow as the current’s go, white-adorned with flower pearls set bright in green and flowing locks. Somewhere far, wood pigeon’s throaty coo, three longer, one double follow through, floats high along soft summer’s breeze, while flagging briefly, one by one, willow’s silver bellied leaves turn and turn to signal with the sun that all is as it should be. All is peace, and all is lazy summer’s eaze.

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Date: 6/17/2020 2:34:00 AM
Oh I absolutely love this one Bob! Such a picturesque muse that I can imagine myself wandering through the place and experiencing bliss. Congratulations on your win :)
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Bob Kimmerling
Date: 6/17/2020 7:12:00 AM
So pleased you like it Aditi, and many thanks for your congrats. Summer stream is the second in a series following 'Summer.' I am hoping for inspiration for a third ..but right now theres a storm and its raining, so maybe it will have to wait!
Date: 6/16/2020 12:51:00 PM
wow what superb imagery no wonder caren loved this so much:-) hugs jan xx
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Bob Kimmerling
Date: 6/16/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thank you Jan. Appreciated. xxx
Date: 6/15/2020 9:40:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Bob Kimmerling
Date: 6/16/2020 6:57:00 AM
Hi Beata. Thanks for your kind words. Inspite of living in a London suburb there is a a Thames tributary not far with beautiful wilded walks that provided the inspiration. Congrats on your favourite scripture win. Beautiful truth. Blessings Bob

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