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Summer Simplicity

Short Forms For Summer Part III Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Summer Simplicity The east rises glory and it gently sweeps my face, the fields of yellow caress my eyes with simplicity. Strawberries and watermelon juicy as a candy-pops, I hear the June bugs titter-tatter and I drown in felicity. Date Written: May 22, 2016

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Date: 5/28/2016 10:05:00 AM
such lovely imagery LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/28/2016 6:35:00 AM
Give me the simple things in life and make me a happy man! This poem has the ability to make me so! Congrats on this fine win, Laura:) Regards // paul
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Date: 5/27/2016 9:34:00 PM
Your poem sings summer Loolu. Congratulations on your win! ; )
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Date: 5/27/2016 9:15:00 PM
I truly loved this one. The imagery is delightful. I only put it a bit lower because of the uneven syllable count. BIG congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/27/2016 11:56:00 AM
Simplicity simply brought out. Congrats, Laura. ~karam~
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Date: 5/27/2016 10:24:00 AM
Congrats Laura.. I really like this one.. seems so mellow and care free :)
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Date: 5/23/2016 1:14:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Date: 5/22/2016 5:30:00 PM
Very pretty...such a mellow feel to it. BG
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