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Summer Sighs

cool breezes tremble warm, shining days gently fade... summer sighs good bye

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Wilma Neels

Date: 10/20/2010 7:09:00 AM

Wow, I love the imagery here Steven! Luckily we are awaiting summer this side of the world :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2010 9:26:00 PM

Lovely depiction of summer ending. A favorite theme I like to write on too! Luv, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2010 1:25:00 PM

A WONDERFUL HAIKU. eNJOYED YOUR POEM. I DID NOT SEE THIS ONE IN MY CONTEST. TAKE CARE~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2010 9:51:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry Steven. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/1/2010 8:13:00 AM

A lovely haiku, Steven! The days grow shorter here in Florida, but it will be months before the "cool breezes tremble." Sort of an almost endless summer. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 9/1/2010 8:03:00 AM

summer does have to end some day. i live in hotlanta so i am not as sad to see it go.lol. great haiku. best wishes in the contest.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/1/2010 7:55:00 AM

love it