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Summer Seduction

Jasmine wafts From sun-kissed shoulders Entrancing the senses Irrevocably For Brian's Contest, "Imagine". The painting which inspired me was "Summer Evening".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/5/2010 10:04:00 PM
Donna~ I wonderful picture you painted with your mind I love this! Love Laura :)
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Date: 11/13/2009 7:22:00 PM
that's what this poem does. It entrances the senses! simple and quite effective. Congrats. Robert
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Date: 11/13/2009 2:37:00 PM
Wonderful expressions from your talented pen... just had to comment again and thankxxx for your blog comments... I like and agree with all u suggested... your input is greatly appreciated... luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 10/29/2009 5:15:00 PM
nicely penned, sun kissed shoulders, nice ideas.
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Date: 10/26/2009 4:34:00 PM
beautifully written .. summer is a seductive time of the year and u have captured it perfectly ... thankxxx for your comments on my halloween contribution... I enjoy PS and all the wonderful poets I have the pleasure to communicate with and share our verses..... Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/24/2009 4:57:00 AM
Congratulations, Donna, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest. Your creativity shines. Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 10/23/2009 1:36:00 PM
Interesting use of multi-sense imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Keep up the good writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen
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Date: 10/19/2009 12:52:00 PM
This is nice! I really like this. I like that you saw romance in this and not necessarily break-up. Congratulations with this beautiful piece!
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Date: 10/19/2009 5:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your well derserved WIN in Brians contest Donna, with this beautiful piece! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/18/2009 9:00:00 AM
I love this interpretation of the painting. Well done, and congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/18/2009 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Donna. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/18/2009 1:10:00 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Donna.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open. Than you for your welcome comments today.
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Date: 10/17/2009 2:08:00 PM
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/16/2009 9:45:00 PM
Beautiful atmosphere in this free verse, Donna. Thank you so much for your comment on my blog. Yes, I am very proud of my son :) Love, Iolanda
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Date: 10/16/2009 4:17:00 PM
Donna This is so dreamy. Outstanding, Good luck in Brian's contest! Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/16/2009 9:54:00 AM
This is such a beautiful rendition of this haunting painting, Donna! I love the title and your layout! Good luck in Brians' contest! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/15/2009 1:35:00 PM
Wow, a true Golden Delicious >> beautiful poem Donna >> James
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:26:00 PM
Sensual. Excellent work.
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Date: 10/15/2009 12:14:00 PM
Wishing you the best in Brian's contest Donna. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2009 8:32:00 AM
And a lovely way of looking at that painting! Nicely done, Donna!~ Carrie
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Date: 10/15/2009 7:07:00 AM
Dear donna, This is very creative and imaginative. Best wishes in brian's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/15/2009 7:06:00 AM
Nice...enjoyed reading...good luck on contest..Marty
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Date: 10/15/2009 6:27:00 AM
nicely penned, Irrevocably fits well with that painting scene, I felt that.
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Date: 10/14/2009 11:50:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Donna.Rgds Brian
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