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When raindrops fall upon unwary trembling leaves summer shakes his head and wonders why rebels dare defy his patient lenient mood; time to turn on the heat. ---------------------------- 15th June 2015 Contest: Shall We Waltz? Sponsor: Kim Merryman Placed 2nd

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/17/2015 1:52:00 AM

G'day Paul... nice format and topic Paul- congratulations - Lindsay

Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay! Your support is much appreciated. Regards // paul

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/16/2015 7:12:00 PM

I just found this jewel my friend. The heat here has been turned on all week! You nailed it with this one! A7

Paul Callus
Date: 7/17/2015 2:43:00 PM

Always pleased to have you stopping by, Robert. Hope all is well. Over here the summer heat is getting unbearable, but I'll not grumble! Thank you for reading and for the high rating. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 5:37:00 PM

just wish someone would explain to me how to get these moving pictures like your raindrops here to move once I post them with my poems!!!(I have a crying moon and it won't cry once it is posted!!)

Paul Callus
Date: 7/13/2015 4:20:00 PM

Hi Andrea! I might have added the picture later. All the animated pictures that I post seem to work. if I am not mistaken, your crying moon appears in 2 different poems....it cries in one and doesn't in the other!! (correct me if I'mwrong) //paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2015 5:36:00 PM

Looking for a poem to comment to, and I am sure I saw all the winners of this contest, nonetheless it seems new to me, maybe you added the picture later? AGain, COngrats!!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/29/2015 7:43:00 AM

Beautiful Paul, :D only now I read your entry to Kim! so late~Olive Eloisa

Paul Callus
Date: 6/29/2015 8:22:00 AM

Thank you Olive_eloi:) Keeping yourself busy is a good sign! Take care...and smile:) hugs // paul

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 2:19:00 AM

How lovely this is, Paul. Congratulations on your win!

Paul Callus
Date: 6/26/2015 6:00:00 AM

Many thanks, Kim! Pleased that you like it:) hugs // paul

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/20/2015 1:34:00 AM

Paul, this is amazing, I am not surprised at all that this is a "winner" Cheers

Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2015 5:30:00 AM

Thank you Arthur. Pleased that enjoyed! All the best. // paul

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 6:36:00 PM

congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus
Date: 6/19/2015 3:21:00 PM

Many thanks, Eve; enjoyed your winning entry, too! Have a nice weekend. // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2015 1:53:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:58:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Hope your weather knows that summer is round the corner:) Hugs // paul

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2015 12:58:00 PM

I like this form, Paul,, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Skat! Will be back to you:) hugs // paul

Constance La France

Date: 6/18/2015 12:37:00 PM

Paul this is a lovely 7 congratulations on your placement and thanks for visiting my poem, dancing flowers

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:54:00 PM

Your dancing flowers know their steps well, Constance:) Thank you for another lovely visit. All the best. // paul

Laura Hay

Date: 6/18/2015 10:41:00 AM

Very creative and well written Paul, congrats, Laura.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 3:00:00 PM

Glad that you found it to your liking, Laura. Thank you for the congrats and lovely comments. All the best. // paul

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/17/2015 11:25:00 PM

Paul, congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:28:00 PM

Thank you Alexis; your support is appreciated:) // paul

Jaycee Cervenka
Date: 6/17/2015 11:40:00 PM

Congratulations on the win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:12:00 PM

wow, I LOVE this one It is quite inventive!! Congrats.

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:26:00 PM

Thank you Andrea:) Tried my best to find something different. Glad you enjoyed. // paul

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/17/2015 8:31:00 PM

Oh, its hot here and I understand the "heat".. Congrats on your win. BG

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:18:00 PM

Thank you Barbara! Here in Malta it keeps getting hotter; good thing we have the sea to make up for it. // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 5:55:00 PM

Paul, congrats on taking 2nd place in my contest! This is a delightful write! I love how you personified summer! Well done! Love, Kim

Paul Callus
Date: 6/18/2015 2:14:00 PM

Many thanks, Kim! I am really pleased with my placing, considering the many lovely entries that I have read. Looking forward to your next challenge:) hugs // paul