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Summer Rain Premiere Contest Winner

SUMMER CALL OF LIGHTNING BUGS AND RAIN At dusk of Spring, the lightning buzz of bugs. The sinkhole drain of creeks, its bed - depressed. What hell has issued this? Clouds, down the dugs! The faded sky, blue dry, thus has oppressed. Oh heaven come close, with manna wet hugs! With mercy prayer, to God, our sins confessed. At summer’s dawn, a nimbostratus calls. The sun is hot beneath the gorgeous falls. ~ ~ ~ The drought, a distant thought, as rain conceives. The humid clouds do water grass and ferns. A summer rain rebirths red wagon. Leaves, submerged in verdant waft. The earth’s soil turns to crimson mud, and raindrops drain off eaves. A prosperous psalm, the creek with child churns. The palpitations - thunder of my soul. Strong pulse of Summer rain - a fruitful bowl. 8/20/2017 Summer Rain Contest (Dale Cozart) 1st Place Ottava Rima Prayer - 1 syllable

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Date: 1/9/2019 3:25:00 PM
I'm back for a re-read. That's why I fave poems and your's is no exception. This was the first entry in the contest and I put it through to the winner's round immediately. I wasn't exactly sure it would win it all, but I found it very hard to imagine anything else coming close. Awesome write!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 4:00:00 PM
Wow, thanks Dale! I also appreciate the reread! I shall have to dig into my faves as well!
Date: 9/7/2017 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2019 4:00:00 PM
Thank you, Anna!
Date: 9/7/2017 6:30:00 AM
An overflowing bowl of brilliance, congrats
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thanks, Donna!
Date: 9/6/2017 8:03:00 PM
Terrific write Kim, congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/7/2017 6:35:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 9/6/2017 3:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, Jan! <3
Date: 9/6/2017 6:33:00 AM
Congrats Kim!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 4:41:00 PM
Thanks, Mike!
Date: 9/6/2017 3:16:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant, congratulations on your well deserved win Kim. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Ronnie!
Date: 9/6/2017 2:16:00 AM
Wow, this is awesome Kim! Great big congratulations on your deserving first placement! : )
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/6/2017 4:39:00 PM
Thank you, Connie!
Date: 9/5/2017 9:20:00 PM
How lovely! Congrats on your top win, Kim! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Janice!
Date: 9/5/2017 8:21:00 PM
Beautifully done, Kim, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Date: 9/5/2017 6:43:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your top win! Spectacular! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:55:00 PM
Thanks, Susan! <3
Date: 9/5/2017 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations Kim on your first place trophy win. I love the imagery in your ottava rima. Well written.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:56:00 PM
Thanks, Janis! <3 Kim
Date: 9/5/2017 4:48:00 PM
Congrats Kim for your #1 ranking!
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Date: 9/5/2017 4:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win! This was a VERY tough contest to judge. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter. Fave.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/5/2017 7:57:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dale! Excited!
Date: 8/24/2017 1:47:00 PM
beautiful poem. good luck in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/24/2017 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 8/21/2017 8:33:00 AM
Well crafted my friend...rain rain go away...god bless...^WW^
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2017 9:16:00 AM
Thanks WW! Blessings, my friend!
Date: 8/21/2017 2:54:00 AM
Well done Kim... could do with a bit of rain here.. haven't seen a drop since March... good luck in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/21/2017 6:49:00 AM
Thanks! I hope you get your rain. We had a drought for quite a while. It has been a lovely summer this year.
Date: 8/20/2017 8:55:00 PM
Well depicted ottava rima.. feel the rain's misery.. good luck, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2017 9:02:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay,

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