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Summer Rain

After blasting fire on the earth when sun felt tired, It is a little effort from summer rain to put off the fire. Summer sun stolen water from puddle, river and ocean, Tears come out from summer rain with extreme grief and pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/22/2016 2:25:00 AM
Sad summer..... we need a storm ....
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Date: 5/26/2016 6:47:00 PM
Very well written.I hate to admit it but I had to read it twice to comprehend.Great piece of art.Jai
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Date: 5/6/2016 10:44:00 AM
Short, sweet and sensational. It's a very decent write. You have explained the water cycle in a very miraculous way. The way you have designed this poem is quite impressive. Keep on going.
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Date: 4/24/2016 5:41:00 PM
nice how you got the rain from the different bodies of water., Nice one, Manmath
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Date: 4/16/2016 10:50:00 AM
Good morning Manmath, I'm happy you enjoyed my new poem. Sometimes, I get pressured by the poets to post a new poem... Love LINDA
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Date: 4/2/2016 9:11:00 AM
Manmath, stunning new write. You painted a wonderful yet, sorrow world of tears. A 7...Linda
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 9:37:00 AM
Ur comment is itself a poem Linda. Sorrow world of tear.......Wow. Thanks a lot.
Date: 4/2/2016 7:02:00 AM
You went above and beyond 575 syllables in haiku form. is that something new and original? I always love warm rain, walk in it. You sure could write a lengthy poem on it. Welcome to ps dear one.
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Date: 4/2/2016 9:38:00 AM
I admit my mistake. it is corrected.
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 4/2/2016 7:12:00 AM
Hi Iris, Thanks a lot for ur valuable comment. I will try to write a poem on summer rain........hugs

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