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Summer Rain

The rain is coming down outside, A chill is in the air; So we spent the afternoon inside, Playing cards and solitaire; The desert air is thriving, From the raindrops falling down And the grease woods come alive; As in the torrent, they drown; The dogs are getting frisky, And the horses huddle up; We all pour a shot of whiskey, In our lukewarm coffee cups; We’re sitting on the terrace, Listening to rain on the tin; The summer heat has been erased; And we just can’t help but grin; We started talking and joking, But silence soon ensued; We watch the rain as it's soaking, Putting us all in a good mood!

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Date: 7/12/2010 9:06:00 AM
Ha ha, I can't imagine being so pleased to see the rain, we get way too much of it over here as a rule. I absolutely love your first stanza and your whole poem is so rich in visuals and sound. Really nice ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/11/2010 11:30:00 PM
Excellent opeming quatrain,that captures the mood well Tirzah.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/11/2010 9:45:00 PM
wow you are a hit Tirzah, love the summer rain, enjoyed your poem. Have anice one, i may try your contest,..lol if there is room for me...Laughing is such a gift of mine,,have anice one,..p.d.
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Date: 7/11/2010 6:43:00 PM
A nice single day feelings of the summer rain.
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