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Summer Rain

The dancing raindrops Race to meet the barren land To quench the earth's thirst

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2010 5:34:00 PM
Nice one, Larry. ..Ralph
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:07:00 PM
I can see the imagery of the rush. The touch is also fascinating as it quenches the thirst of the land. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:28:00 AM
Beautiful! J
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Date: 6/21/2010 2:29:00 AM
Another great haiku, Larry, and a tribute to your versatility! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:41:00 PM
love it, keep up the excellent writing!------Ell
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