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Summer Passage

Summer Passage Bones burnt white and crisp on deserts open hell of summer Eyes turn painful red in sun’s fierce and punishing glare But children only know the surf and blue rolling waves Cool breezes, endless play, and warmth of friends Sky and sand take over Become the blue and white of life These things pass into tranquility in slow autumnal flow On gentle orange and yellow spiraling leaves at leisure Drifting, tumbling as in sleep, with no particular place to go Autumn catches every fragrance of the harvest too Lavender and pumpkin tell the truth The moon grows large as we pick every plant September, October and November forget the past As they sleep beneath the green serene Of summer's grass Created on 8/30/14 for Summer’s End Poetry contest

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Date: 9/17/2014 5:01:00 AM
- A great 2nd place,Earl ! - A poem that I liked very much, beautifully written - Congratulations on your win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/17/2014 12:03:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, Thank you. Your entry was superior and very enjoyable to read. Congratulations on your 1st. place well deserved win. I hope you have a pleasant day. Take it easy. Earl
Date: 9/17/2014 4:59:00 AM
Enjoyed the summer passage with nice imagery, Earl
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Date: 9/17/2014 12:14:00 PM
Hi Dr. Mehta, Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Your acrostic entry was very well done and a fun read. Congratulations on your win in the contest as well. Take it easy. Earl
Date: 9/16/2014 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Earl. I could smell the fruits of harvest as I read this beautiful poem.
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Date: 9/16/2014 10:19:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Congratulations are in order for you too on your very energetic well deserved win. Take care. Earl
Date: 9/16/2014 7:52:00 PM
Everything about this poem was so enjoyable, Earl. The serene, relaxed quality of the imagery, the descriptions of the fragrances were lovely! Congratulations on your win!
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Earl Schumacker
Date: 9/16/2014 8:41:00 PM
Hi Kelly, Thank you for your kind words and interest in my poem. I am happy that you liked it. That is praise enough. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
Date: 8/30/2014 1:46:00 PM
wonderful imagery Earl i am really enjoying reading the descriptive writes for this contest- good luck:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:50:00 PM
Hi Jan. Thank you so much for your kind words. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It is very well done and has merit. I wish you luck. Take care. Earl

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