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Summer Nights

Laying on the ground wish upon a stars twinkle. Gentle breeze captures the way his lips touch mine we kiss under the moon light. Cory long 7-11-2011 Tanka You contest

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Elaine George

Date: 7/18/2011 11:29:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Cory Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/18/2011 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Cory in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/17/2011 5:51:00 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Cory

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/17/2011 1:06:00 PM

Very romantic..Congrats..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/16/2011 9:51:00 PM

Congrats cory on your HM in Summer Nights luv with this lovely entry ..sweetly penned my friend..enjoy special honor ...

Francine Roberts

Date: 7/16/2011 9:23:00 PM

congrats Cory on your Honorable Mention in the contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2011 9:03:00 PM

This is precious.It's a bit like my tanka! I think many people went the "romantic route!" Luv ,Andrea

Shannon Deane

Date: 7/13/2011 6:26:00 AM

Soup mail for you...what a fantastic read, especially since you wrote it on my birthday...xoxo

Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2011 2:38:00 PM

Lovely tender piece, Cory

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/12/2011 8:37:00 AM

Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the contest..Oh What A Night..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2011 7:24:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest with this wonderful poem Cory. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 10:00:00 PM

sewtnesss all the way, cory.. what a fine piece with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

Judy Ball

Date: 7/11/2011 6:39:00 PM

Nicely done. This conjures up images of lazy Summer nights under the stars. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2011 5:42:00 PM

Nice.. I will find a spot on that ground.. and than enjoy the stats only.. romantic poem... Take care,.. p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 5:18:00 PM

oh so very pretty cory and so romantic my friend.. good luck in the contest with these lovely summer night lines luv..