Summer Magic

midday summer storm sunburst plies its charmer’s touch- steam rising from road

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Robert Lindley

Date: 7/6/2014 7:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win!!

Len Gasun

Date: 7/6/2014 1:49:00 AM

A great haiku with magically beautiful image of summer! thank u so much for sharing and congratulations on this great poem and awesome win my dear friend david! love and hugs, Leonora

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/5/2014 12:33:00 AM

Nice images of rain, david

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2014 10:33:00 AM

nice win... thank you..Linda

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/15/2014 6:08:00 PM

Lovely...I can smell the rain.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2014 3:47:00 PM

Nice one!! Very descriptive.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2014 4:15:00 PM

Very observant! Very good write, too. // paul

David Mohn
Date: 5/3/2014 7:39:00 PM

Thanks Paul..always great to get comments from you..very appreciated