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Summer Love Sijo

I kiss my summer love goodbye - as winter’s surely here: The autumn brought our falling out and cooled the lusty heat And now we stand as chilly as the ice that freezes both our hearts. For Debbie’s Sijo contest

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Elaine George
Date: 7/4/2014 6:34:00 AM
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I love the connection you made with autumn and falling out...Beautiful play on words. Many congrats on your win with the lovely sijo, Jack. bfn Lainie
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Elaine George
Date: 7/4/2014 6:33:00 AM
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I love the connection you made with autumn and falling out...Beautiful play on words. Many congrats on your win with the lovely sijo, Jack. bfn Lainie
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/3/2014 10:11:00 PM
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You did a lot better than me in this one, Jack. Congrats to you, my friend. A well deserved win.
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Poet Destroyer A
Date: 7/3/2014 11:33:00 AM
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Wonderful win Jack...Linda
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/3/2014 10:47:00 AM
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Wonderful sijo Jack ! Loved the hearts freeze,,, congrats on huge win !
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 7/3/2014 5:57:00 AM
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Lovely write on the summer love, Jack, congrats on the win
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/2/2014 6:17:00 PM
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weeeee. your first line is so catchy.. :D KUDOS!!!
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Casarah Nance
Date: 7/2/2014 6:03:00 PM
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grats on your win Jack :)
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Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/2/2014 3:45:00 PM
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Hi Jack, congratulations on well-deserved great win! This is just a lovely write! Kindest regards.
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/2/2014 1:53:00 PM
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Congrats on a great win, Jack, my friend! Hugs.. Arlene
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Robert Johnson
Date: 6/27/2014 7:54:00 AM
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How do we survive the winter And summer seems so short. In cold the love does splinter. In warmth, we woo and court.
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John Lawless
Date: 6/20/2014 6:43:00 AM
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BRRR. Well done with this tricky little form. Not as easy as this write makes it look.
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Joe Maverick
Date: 6/18/2014 5:26:00 PM
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Interesting Sijo on summer love Jack, I can guess a lot of people would recognise these realities you express through this form of verse..'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/15/2014 10:45:00 PM
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From summer heat of passion to winters frigid cold.... well told!!
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